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son in my hands.<br />
They are filled with his anger.<br />
Their bones are bolstered with his immense strength.<br />
They stand tall, bold and ready to fly his flag.
They stand tall, bold, and ready to fly his flag.
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And in that moment I know the change my boy has brought.<br />

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Radiation clicks the static stripping layers from drums<br />
Needles black, white and blue noise into my back<br />
Needles black, white, and blue noise into my back<br />
&emsp;&emsp;image push through hertz<br />
Glare throws my reflection in place<br />
X marks the spot &#x2013; aimed to kill me<br />

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<p>Comrades find comrades</p>
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Ache<br />
My arms pull, grapple and pull<br />
My arms pull, grapple, and pull<br />
&emsp;More corpses<br />
&emsp;&emsp;More remains
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