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seconds. During which a warm feeling within my chest, underneath where
the ribs meet to create the sternum, glows. I find that
<em>'redemption tour'</em> is a track absolutely bursting with
sincerity; as if it is daring you to drop all preconcieved notions of
irony, detachment and worries of coming off as 'cringe' through
sincerity; as if it is daring you to drop all preconceived notions of
irony, detachment, and worries of coming off as 'cringe' through
modelling it to you itself. An approach I adore.
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I rarely listen to this track once. I always make sure to queue it up at
least 2 times and would gladly repeat it into the double-digits. I
thought, maybe, to express the short length as a fault of the song,
though - after some thought - I feel it to be a good choice: as it is
though — after some thought — I feel it to be a good choice: as it is
somewhat repetitive, the track does not over-stay its welcome. One can
always invite it in again. Like I do, always.
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<b>Sadness</b> has me focus on the warbled and stretched notes she
sings as though they are near-faltering, lornful cries; and the
sings as though they are near-faltering, forlorn cries; and the
downward trajectory of the two-chord piano progression which makes me
feel heavy with each strike;
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