diff --git a/blog/2024-08-18-review-redemption-tour-klein.html b/blog/2024-08-18-review-redemption-tour-klein.html index 5a80ae7..13905ca 100644 --- a/blog/2024-08-18-review-redemption-tour-klein.html +++ b/blog/2024-08-18-review-redemption-tour-klein.html @@ -188,8 +188,8 @@ seconds. During which a warm feeling within my chest, underneath where the ribs meet to create the sternum, glows. I find that 'redemption tour' is a track absolutely bursting with - sincerity; as if it is daring you to drop all preconcieved notions of - irony, detachment and worries of coming off as 'cringe' through + sincerity; as if it is daring you to drop all preconceived notions of + irony, detachment, and worries of coming off as 'cringe' through modelling it to you itself. An approach I adore.

@@ -197,7 +197,7 @@ I rarely listen to this track once. I always make sure to queue it up at least 2 times and would gladly repeat it into the double-digits. I thought, maybe, to express the short length as a fault of the song, - though - after some thought - I feel it to be a good choice: as it is + though — after some thought — I feel it to be a good choice: as it is somewhat repetitive, the track does not over-stay its welcome. One can always invite it in again. Like I do, always.

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