From 6b36f067211a64c274a62f2389fc9c067384e8a547fbac29dd2014b53f9eaeae Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: nnwhen <nnwhen@nnwhen.com>
Date: Thu, 19 Jun 2025 23:18:08 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] fixed grammar

---
 now.html | 41 ++++++++++++++++++++---------------------
 1 file changed, 20 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-)

diff --git a/now.html b/now.html
index 2fcfa53..0730c92 100644
--- a/now.html
+++ b/now.html
@@ -178,7 +178,7 @@
           <p>
             I take it back<br />
             I want you now<br />
-            I need you now (The taste of you name)<br />
+            I need you now (The taste of your name)<br />
             Feels like I'll drown, without you now (On my lips)<br />
             Blood on your hips
           </p>
@@ -188,7 +188,7 @@
             And I don't need no fucking bands
           </p>
           <p>
-            I need your, hands<br />
+            I need your hands<br />
             Need your hips, I need your lips on my lips and I'm<br />
             Bleeding out when I trip<br />
             I fucking miss you when I think
@@ -202,7 +202,7 @@
           <p>
             I take it back<br />
             I want you now<br />
-            I need you now (The taste of you name)<br />
+            I need you now (The taste of your name)<br />
             Feels like I'll drown, without you now (On my lips)<br />
             Blood on your hips
           </p>
@@ -212,11 +212,11 @@
             And I don't need no fucking bands
           </p>
           <p>
-            I need your, hands<br />
+            I need your hands<br />
             Need your hips, I need your lips on my lips and I'm<br />
             Bleeding out when I trip<br />
             I fucking miss you when I think<br />
-            I need your, hands<br />
+            I need your hands<br />
             Need your hips, I need your -
           </p>
           <p>
@@ -230,7 +230,7 @@
             And you can hurt me, Got my heart in my hands<br />
             I got blood on my vans<br />
             And I don't need no fucking bands<br />
-            I need your, hands<br />
+            I need your hands<br />
             Need your hips, I need your lips on my lips and I'm<br />
             Bleeding out when I trip<br />
             I fucking miss you when I think
@@ -258,13 +258,13 @@
           Toggle Lyrics
         </button>
         <p class="lyrics" id="foster-20250527T2255Z-000">
-          Baby faster <br />
+          Baby, faster <br />
           We got a lot in our wake<br />
           and in the back view<br />
           never look back again<br />
           never look back again<br />
           <br />
-          Baby faster<br />
+          Baby, faster<br />
           &ensp;<em>(It's dark in the water)</em><br />
           We got a lot in our wake<br />
           and in the back view<br />
@@ -290,24 +290,23 @@
         <p>
           While I didn't stop maintaining habits, I haven't posted here nearly
           as frequently as before. Partly because I don't really know what to
-          share and partly because I haven't been journalling extensively. In
-          that case I'd imagine it'd be simpler.
+          share, and partly because I haven't been journalling extensively. In
+          that case, I'd imagine it'd be simpler.
         </p>
+
         <p>
           I have been struggling with setting up a Mastodon / Akkoma instance. I
-          had a Mastodon instance previously but that's no longer the case. I
-          wanted something more lean but now I can't figure out Akkoma and don't
-          remember the hoops I jumped through to get my Mastodon working.
+          had a Mastodon instance previously, but that's no longer the case. I
+          wanted something more lean, but now I can't figure out Akkoma and
+          don't remember the hoops I jumped through to get my Mastodon working.
         </p>
+
         <p>
           I think that's for a day when I'm feeling particularly energised. I
-          can tell it will take a lot of mental effort lol.
-        </p>
-        <p>
-          <span class="highlight"
-            >I think I will resolve to write a poem today.</span
-          >
+          can tell it will take a lot of mental effort, lol.
         </p>
+
+        <p class="highlight">I think I will resolve to write a poem today.</p>
       </section>
 
       <section class="now" id="0008">
@@ -340,7 +339,7 @@
         <p>
           I'm considering ways to share snippets and such,
           <a target="_blank" href="socials.html"
-            >if you have any ideas please let me know</a
+            >if you have any ideas, please let me know</a
           >. I know that Bandcamp has a preview feature but, as far as I know,
           they need to know what other tracks will be on the Album too. Which I
           do not know myself.
@@ -445,7 +444,7 @@
             <br /><br />
             Tell them lies in your head that make me seem like someone else
             <br /><br />
-            To be honest I just want to rest my head on your chest
+            To be honest, I just want to rest my head on your chest
           </p>
         </div>
         <ul class="thread-update">